Don't know what you edited, but this was a nice story. It shows more than evilness to the charaters.

me like, me like lol
I've lost touch with your stories so now i have tons of them to read! keep on writing I've always loved your stuff!

OOH! I like! You should elaborate more on what happened to Hope from the time Gabrielle left her in the basket to the time she met up with Callisto.