That..was honestly pretty sad(I'm glad I wasn't in too good a mood when I read the first part.) I mean I'm really thinking of it happening to you when I say that, but its sad seeing it happen to Natsuki as well. Just goes to show you that "Natsuki" doesn't need "Shizuru" ;) (two meanings.) Ah, well when something you lost begins to make you feel bad, try and think of the better thing that you've gained. (..tried to sound wiser, but I'm not so sure it sounded good.) well even if I said it poorly, its no less true

T-T that was so sad and sweet! amazing

loved it :D

What Shizuru did was so terrible DX

breaking up with Natsuki when she was working so hard to make her happy, and she loved her so much!

yah Nao for making everything better! :D

an amazing job you did, Tenshuki-san *bows*

Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting!

Man, Shizuru was a total BITCH!

And Nao was AW3SOME! :DD

I LOEVed Nats' li'l speech at the end. It doesn't get anymore romantic and cheesy than that! *O*

Now, I hope you get over that chick, kiddo. :3 You can do better.

N-I-CE work!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

we have 2 diffrent shizurus in our heads..and...I AM NOT ! i dont like it ! its not ture you are blind and crazy and its my amazing super sweet goddess/girlfirend/future wife haha *kisses* mine

I never actually finished Mai-hime, but this was great, I personally love Mai and Nao, Natsuki, she's fine.

XD. Nice one-shot!

:D

Shizuru pissed me off. She was such a bish in this fic XD I loved the ending 3 Great one-shot!