Nice, really good in fact, go on. I want to know what happens next.

*squeal in delight, clap hands, bow affectatiously, repeat ad infinitum* Dude, you are the god of amazingly cute, yet astoundingly funny fanfiction. The only minor complaint I have with this series as of yet is mixing the Tenchi Universe (i.e. Nagi) and OVA (Ryoko's divisive powers and Ryo-Ohki in child form) continuities. I must say, however, that I absolutely LOVE where this is going. You have an uncanny ability to reach right into my mind, see what I want, and then write it. First it was ED! as a Ctarl-Ctarl... now it's ED!, daughter of the most perfect, intelligent, beautiful, and wondermous person in all of recorded history! Granted, that would have to mean that she and Applederry... well, never mind, just relating her and ED! is more than enough to forgive any transgression of that type. I have yet to read a story of yours that didn't please me in a profound and aesthetic way. Keep up the good work!

This is very interesting so far! Nagi and Ryoko "getting along," rather, working together for a change, eh? Well, kinda. That is, when they're not about to fight, LOL. I'm interested in where you'll go with this. And, I'm wondering about a couple of things, so keep up the great work! Post more when you can.

Love the story so far. Ed is a great character, love her none use of pronouns. Had never thought of it but matching her up with Ryo-chan is prefect, those two really compliment each other. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Sorry about the double poast before. Anyway, at first I wasn't exspecting Washu to be the mommy . . .

Now, I'm wondering what kind of people did spawn someone like Ed.

Oh, and it was Judy Blume who wrote that book. I use to read it all the

time in the six grade. Still, looks like it's going to be an intresting

story that only you could tell. :) Ego boosting, I know it.

Now, I'm wondering what kind of people did spawn someone like Ed.

Oh, and it was Judy Blume who wrote that book. I use to read it all the

time in the six grade. Still, looks like it's going to be an intresting

story that only you could tell. :) Ego boosting, I know it.