I'm so glad I found this story! It was one of my favorites when I was in middle school and I thought I'd lost it forever. Lots of love!

You are an amazing writer. In everything. Your storyline, your dialogue (unlike George Lucas), setting the scene. And your story just changes into something more than lost girl goes to neverland. I absolutely love it. You have made an amazing story that does not rely on the romance, or the sex scenes. You made a pure Peter Pan adventure, unlike the majority of other stories that are written on here. This was truely delightful.

Great story! It must feel good to have completed a multi-chapter story (I've yet to do that, myself). It kept me coming back for more, which is a mark of a good story. The sound track thing is different, but it's kind of cool thinking of songs reprsenting a story (especially if the story doesn't have a song made specifically for it yet). I've actually taken time to wonder what different songs (including begining songs) would be like for my own stories both my fan fics, and originals.

Oh. Must read more!

Wow. This is an incredible chapter. Makes me want to get off my lazy luarels and get to writing my own stories. (Of course, I've also got other things I ought to be doing as well...) Good writing. I definitly plan to read more of the story.

Interesting... Very interesting... Um... Good writing. This makes Peter an even more interesting character, and I like your discription of his eyes. I'll read more now...

awesome story!

Oh my gosh, you are my GOD! This story is amazing! The ideas are so unique and it is written so well! It's midnight and i gotta got to bed but i'm so gonna read the next story!! Ah, you are so cool!

". . they were as opposite as night and day. He was about the same age, a few inches taller, a year or so older. ."

It's a really good story tho!

Vgood...

I like the Time twist @ the end...

I like you choice of music for the soundtrack. I've heard the ones by Martina McBride, one by Garth Brooks, N SYNC, BSB, Avril, and some others.. They're very good choices!

Loved it!

wow. i read this because i was bored, and i've had fun with fanfics before, but this touched me. you're an incredible writer, and i'm definitely reading more of your stuff. not only was your storyline excellent but the love story absolutely amazing. i feel like i can relate, in a strange sort of way. you did an incredible job. i know you will but i'll say it anyway: keep writing.

*sighs* Omg ok i have to say, I read a TON of fics and so far this is one of the best, most creative I have ever read. This is SO going on my favorites list. Great writing and wonderful storyline. ^_^
Anya

bloody brilliant! I enjoyed very much this story. you wrote it so well it was amazing. Almost a tearjerker for me too. Well done.

Baaaadddd tink. She's doing it again.
Whaaa? Never go hungry again? What book is this? You know, I think I've read this chapter. I did read this chapter. Damn.