This is VERY good. A really interesting insight into his feelings.

Hello, I think this is brilliant when I finished I said wow silently to myself. I loved it. Keep up the great, wonderful, work.

Namarie

Sweet! You were right, he needed one ;)

(Mouth is hanging open.) (long pause) That was...SO GOOOOOOODDDDD! (takes in a deep breath) WOW! That was *extremely* insightful. I feel so sorry for Aragorn, but that really sounds like something he would be thinking. I was a bit surprised that he didn't mention Arwen, but other than that, that was...oh, my goodness... Wheeew!

Sam: Translation: "I weally weally wike it! A pwus!"

Me: (whacks him over the head) I don't talk like a three-year-old! (pause) The rest was right, though...

Keeeeeeeeep uuuuuuuup tthhhhhheeeee gooooood wooorrkkk! D

This was really good. And it even rhimed.

Hugs Phoebe

WOWSERS! YAY! GO STRIDER! Sorry... there's a shortage of good Aragorn ficcies.

Verra good poem

keeeewl...poor strider hyyypeeeeeeer!Bouncy bouncy SPLAT! O.o...vewy good poem

Beautiful! this is perfect! You have captured how Strider is. My own poetry sucks (I don't know why I put it on the net!), so I am not a good judge at all. I can tell you one thing, though! I certainly ain't !%$y! Not at all!

Good rythm and beat! I especially liked the lines

"Nobody knows me - And those who do, don't

No one talks to me - And those who would won't" and "We'll live happily ever after.. So I am told" Keep writing!

Wow. That was a lovely poem. What's the name of the story you're writing? Is it about Aragon?

Ivy

*claps* Yay! That was good!

Love the flow of this poem ever so much. You've got the Strider chacter right down pat. Pats Misto on the head My little F.C.A.S'er all grown up. Sniffs I'm just so proud of you.

Aww.. Gorgeous! It fits Strider wonderfully. I know a certain someone who would simply adore this little diddy... Great job! *Adrienne

YAY! WRITING AS I TYPE THIS! it's beautiful...

ARG! you are so dang talented. *sniffle*