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| Tzeveliniu 2008-07-24 ch 5,  | abuseNow this is really exciting, I don't need anymore to tell you how well written in detail thi chapter was and a very action packed one at that 'cuz you already know. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-07-24 ch 4, | abuseIt couldn't possibly be getting better than this, 4 chapters so far and it's really getting my blood up. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-07-24 ch 3, | abuseOhh poor Kris, that must've really hurt, what a way to get torment and Jade is becoming a Charizard that means Firestorm is becoming a human too? |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseWell apart of that being a great well written chapter the idea of having Kris switch species with Nightslice is a neat idea |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseNightslice is becoming a human? now I've seen everything. |
| Azure Ghidorah 2006-07-26 ch 20, | abuseDM02: Well I must say, like the last one, this was a great story. However, I'm curious about things. First, is Lugia alright? (I just don't want to see the Psychic/Flying type die. He's just to nice, and he's one of my favorite Poke'mon so I would be devasted if he died.) Second, can Kris pull Nightslice's trick of being able to change her form? (She seemed better as a Scyther in my opinion even after the incident when she chowed down on that Rocket, I understand why she did that though. I think the Rocket deserved to end up as Scyther chow after what he did to Kris, or as he called her, Swordia... That name sounds cool. The ironic thing is that Kris was the Scyther that... did 'that' thing to him) Third, I don't understand how Serac is able to talk with Dracia. (I know her soul is in the pendant but how did it get there?) Forth, why did the group split up? P.S. Whoops! Another long review. My mistake because I just kept blabbing on. |
| Solarice04 2004-04-19 ch 20, | abuseVery good story. One question: Whatever happened to the Scyther baby? After that one scene involving Blastoise and Ivysaur, we never saw it again. I can't wait to see your next story. |
| gfd 2004-04-04 ch 3, anon. | abusend sorry for not asking you |
| gfd 2004-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseman...your stories are long... i tried printing them and they coughwed up around 100 pages... |
| Blueraven64 2003-05-20 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I LIKE! |
2003-01-28 ch 4, anon. | abusei know who aigul is...... |
2003-01-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseaigul is lugia spelled backwards.... |
| Replica * 2002-10-24 ch 20, anon. | abuse* Replica is my FF.Net name, too. Why do you have to end this season? What's the next going to be about? Why the change in the name? Just a few questions that I want to ask you. :) I first heard of you through ivynajspyder.com and searched for you on FF.Net. Keep on writing! Everyone loves your fics! |
| Dragon Shi 2002-10-10 ch 20, | abuseSometimes when I read this story I feel like I'm watching a movie. This story is very interesting and exciting. I hope you will do as good as you did in this story when you write the third season. Also just to tell I am almost finished chapter 2 of "A New World" So check me out when you have the time. |
| Alex Warlorn 2002-10-09 ch 20, | abused last been it. d last been in. Firestorm, Kris and Jade (human again). All three? Hey! I have that song. Anyway, I just have to go back and read this again, if I ever get the time . . Lovely work. |