This chapter was really good, the best one yet and their were no spelling mistakes. You've really out did yourself this time my friend. I hope to read your next Road Rover stories within the future.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Great story. Such a heartwarming ending. I think you did your best in this story. Keep at it and don't give up in future stories.

PS: I'm working on my next story now.

A beautiful story, and congrats to Hunter and Colleen on the birth of their son. I loved the sense of them all being a happy family and the way Hunter was right at Colleen's side through it all.

Hope to see the next one soon.

Excellent chapter and nice ending. It's great to see a new life brought into the world. Can't wait for the next story.

I'm looking forward to the last part of this. I see a few typos, but for the most part this is good.

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Romans 3:6-7 May it never be! For otherwise, how will God judge the world? But if through my lie the truth of God abounded to His glory, why am I also still being judged as a sinner?

This was pretty good. I'm sorry to hear what you have been going through. I hope you feel better and recover. Keep up the good work.

(PS: I think I overlooked the part where Jenna first had Freeze/heat vision :P )

Good work on this chapter, I can't wait to see what will happen in the next one.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Nice chapter. I like the action and the resourcefulness of the Rovers. Keep up the good work.

Man, who would have thought. Looks like the road rovers have some extra help on their mission. I just hope it works out.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Ah, as soon as I read "black cloak", I thought this figure seemed familiar. xD Anyways, good chapter, nice suspense there for a second. I wonder who's in charge...

Keep it up!

Oh boy, this does not look good for the Road Rover team. How will they get out of this mess?

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Hmm, a rover collar, huh? :D

Great chapter. Can't wait to see the rest. :)

This chapter looks good too. I wonder who that guy was within your chapter that told of him being trapped on an island while being hunted down by robots and other men? Update as soon as you can!

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Good chapter. I wonder who that "figure" is. :)

One thing I noticed:

"They watched as Blitz and Jenna were seated underneath a tree talking while Exile and Jenna were playing in the ocean."

You put "Jenna" twice. :P

PS: My story is almost complete!