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Drake Nolsa 10/2/10 . chapter 1
Funny. Misao is that loud isn't she?
Zokusho 10/1/10 . chapter 1
Now I just wonder what would a Zombisao holocaust be like?
The Great and Powerful Joe 10/1/10 . chapter 1
Your attempt at this...well...unusual contest was interesting.

I enjoyed the way you wrote the characters.

And I have to admit, I couldn't stop laughing when Miki revealed the harsh truth as to why she didn't help them in the end.

Now, to see if there are better ones then yours...I personally know I won't write an attempt.(My computer's motherboard blew up ;_;)
Solarius Scorch 10/1/10 . chapter 1
Haha! It was much funnier than one could expect from a silly story about... we all know what about, it's in the preface.

My favourite lines:

"...mumbling things man was not meant to hear. Fortunately, Tadao wasn't home right now"

"If I don't have a plan, there is no part of it that can go wrong. It is a perfect strategy"

"The Pock* is a lie!"

And also:

"W-What! No! He is kind, and gentle, and nice, and pretty, and, and..." Awwwwwwww.

And all Tsukasa moments. I mean come on, she's perfect.

I DID laugh at the fic. That's not an everyday occurence.
ArmorBlade 10/1/10 . chapter 1
Great narration tone to present this in a rather silly but oh so very enjoyable take. Not sure which to feel more sorry for or who is a total win - Tsukasa's sleepy antics or Miki's comment that ignoring the tortured yells is common place in order to remain sane. Just something very wrong with this set up - nice work.
Racke 10/1/10 . chapter 1
Zombisao has encountered a vile plot indeed. I shudder at the mention of eating healthy things instead of snacks.

Also, sleep-deprived Tsukasa is epic.
Tarjshia 10/1/10 . chapter 1
This was a lot of fun to read. The dialogue was funny and the characters were completely hilarious.

Extra props for not going down the lemony route that seems so hard to avoid with a challenge of this nature.
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