Gosh! I really didn't see that one coming! In this last chapter, I went from shock and disgust when I realized Shuuhei was in on this, to pity when I realized how badly he'd been manipulated. Manipulated into actually killing the judges, which means he's not going to be able to back down even when he realizes who was really behind the hollofication thing.

Oh, what an unexpected twist! I really didn't see that coming at all. Although, now that I think about it, it is really quite tragic. Although Hisagi thinks he knows the truth, he's being manipulated as well - perhaps even more deviously than Kira - to think that he's serving justice for the vizard ex-captains and vice-captains.

There's a segment that I don't quite understand though: "The other three judges were removed before Nanao's kidou could cause their slit throats to glow something other than violet. Or before she pulled up whatever Gin's color was and happened to notice that none of the six judges had shown any kind of glow at all."

How can the kidou either show on the judges a glow other than violet, or no glow at all? Did you mean to say that none of the judges had one of the three glow colours observed previously?

. . . This chapter changes the tone of the previous chapters completely! I love it!

This was an amazing. Can't believe Hisagi was spriniging a trap. Glad it didnt' work though.

oh wow... this part was so realistic that I had to rush to my bleach infos to see if Shuuhei had actually turned.

Once again very lovely tha Yashiru mantion and the matsumoto talks this was completely different from what I expected

I like the downer mood. Is that horrible? Ah, Kira and his depressiong! 3

I like how you have Kira working through his feelings in this chapter. Its the best so far.

Yes. Go Kira. That's the vice-captain I know and love.

Very interesting Aishuu, this was one of my favourites so far!

I especially loved the part with Yachiru, asking for a fight is very much an 11th division frame of mind!

I am intrigued! I think you did a great job of characterizing the lieutenants; I would like to see something from Hisagi's point of view, too! He is extremely mature and calm, but he has to be near his own breaking point with Tosen's betrayal and all...

Nothing to say in particular besides: I like it! Nanao is one of my favorite characters from Bleach, and she's great in this chapter! Yay!

Well, you sure like to keep us in the dark, don't you? So now, we know that it is a hollow, but that's it. I suppose I'll just have to wait for the next chapter then. You're quite a smart writer XD

Are all the chapters going to end with the attack starting? Because I think that'd be cruel.

Also, I love Matsumoto's characterization! And how she views her body!

This is really good. Are you going to finish it? Who is attacking them?

Not bad, but I really wish you'd take the time to finish some other fics that have been lingering.

I do like the take on the events after Aizen's betrayal and the human thoughts and feelings though and look forward to where this will go, especially as there is a Captain near by as well as other Vice-Captain's in the area.