  Joseph 5/27/09 . chapter 1 I liked this story and "Unexpected Joys." I think perhaps you should do a story where they go back to that planet in "Unexpected Joys" and open up a can of whoop-a$$ on Odan and take down the whole terrorist network there and then sign that planet into the Commonwealth. You can either set it between the 2 stories or after "Christmas presents." Other than some typos and a few grammatical errors possibly due to some of those typos it was great. |
| Rogueforareason 10/6/08 . chapter 33 Ok so I know that it has been a while since you wrote this but I just read it and loved it...I would love to read more about what happens...how does the crew react to Rommie and Harper...what about the kids...the story is just so good... |
 MaryRose 12/19/02 . chapter 33This story was good. |
| julz 8/22/02 . chapter 29 aw, its finished for today , that sucks, your stsory is the best , write more soon, are cassidy asnd nelah (?) gonna get along and give cassie some sort of psycosis( wrong word) is harper gonna gety attached to n and want more children, |
| Cassie Valentine 7/27/02 . chapter 1 Hey guys!
Well, I've posted up to Chap. 26, only 7 left. I do have a couple of single stories, short ones, that will be going up after this one is done, but, I need the feed back to put it all up. If I don't think anyone's reading, I may never finish. . . .
Cassie |
| darkelf1313 6/13/02 . chapter 23 Another great chapter. I wanst expecting that! Well, I am assumng you are not finished, so I will just give my usual plea for you to update soon! |
| darkelf1313 6/9/02 . chapter 22 Great couple of chapters! The last one was really short though. I hope you will update again soon, as the suspence is officially killing me now. |
| chrissie 6/9/02 . chapter 22 please hurry real soon i can't wait to find out what is wrong with beka |
| Remie B 6/8/02 . chapter 22 even though i have read this entire story on another web site, i still get excited when you post more. I love this story! |
| Troll99 6/4/02 . chapter 1 I just love sequences with Cassie and Rommie! They are both so cute! |
| Kate 5/20/02 . chapter 17 I can feel the excitement building...this is incredibly good...keep it up! |
| chrissie 5/15/02 . chapter 16 please please please continue reeaal soon i can't wait to find out cassie's reaction, and beka and dylan's reaction when they find out how rommie explained things... it is all getting very interesting! |
| nsane1 5/13/02 . chapter 15 pyjama days, funny Cassie, a great chapter title, what isn't there to like!
Makes me miss when there was new Christmas Presents:(:D
Jen |
| chrissie 5/10/02 . chapter 14 as always i luv these stories and i really hope you continue with it real soon |
| Rudy 5/9/02 . chapter 13 your story is absolutely adorable! you have to right more. the sooner the better |
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