Perfect description of Tom! Good job!

thenewkait

This was interesting, and I loved reading about young Tom. I liked Delia's character, and felt sorry for her by the end.

there's some stuff at the end that you might want to look over... just some mistakes and stuff. Otherwise, I love the - well, it's almost a transition from Tom to Voldemort... I don't know whether to laugh or not that he didn't know what Delia or whatever her name was wanted... I dunno, I just liked this a lot. Nice job.

I really like the start! The rest of the story is good too but the intro is my favorite part. Keep up the good work.

This is really very dark and I see a much older, turned Tom Riddle instead of the charming (but manipulative) boy. Your Tom rather reminds me of the snake he job on the creepy side of Voldemort.

That was a clever story. Liked how he isolated himself because he considers solitude equals power.

this is interesting, i'd like to see where this goes...