Awh! This was such a good chapter! Thistle is such a cutie ! :3

YAY! Another anxiously awaited update! It really makes my day to read more of this lovely story, and you know that, of course. :) I've been dying for some FayexRyou fluff. Poor Ryou; it is ironic that he has a tendency to get hurt a lot. Glad Faye's there to nurse him back to health. ;) And Thee got some limelight! Love how she made a contribution, even a simple one as fetching water, and did it with such eagerness and dedication. It shows that in the small amount of time her and Ryou met, she's already so fond of him. Adorable! Hmmm, Faye, I think we all know what you mean when you say "you need him". Reowwww. ;) Heheheheheheheheh.

Poor Mokuba. I hope he turns out ok. That would be an interesting pic: Mokuba with slightly shorter hair. Hmmm, maybe. XD I wanna draw a pic of him knocking over tables and vases with his big head! XDD

Awww, slightest hint of some revolutionshipping fluffy. I love it. I wonder how Tea's mom is going to react to finding out her B.F.F.L. is a psychopath. Should be interesting. And I love her dad! :3 family time fun!

Can't wait for the next installment! I'm sensing things aren't nearly as calm and cool as we're led to believe. What will happen next? I can't wait to find out! Great job and happy writing! :3

*hugs Ryou* Hugs are plasters for hurt feelings! _ Man, this whole search and rescue thing is really distressing, but in a good way. Like when you're watching Cloverfield, and you're thinking, "Woah, that guy got killed... GEESUS WHAT THE HELL IS THAT GIANT MONSTER LOOKING THING?" I can't take the pressure!

Signed,

Regina Philange

MCRmy Killjoy

My favourite character in Super Smash Bros. Brawl Wii is Sheik because she's a ninja! Wa-chow karate chop! I feel so sorry for Ryou's mum... her being sick and whatnot... she was horrible to Ryou, when he was all like, "We could leave and he keeps hurting you and I feel like a penguin!" and the mum was like, "Aw HAIL tuh duh naw, bitch! *SLAP* He is yo' daddy. *coughity cough*" Sad face.

Signed,

Regina Philange

MCRmy Killjoy

GASP! Mary-Alice is Faye's mum? WOAH. Hey, wait a minute, didn't Faye say that her dad, who was an albino, married Faye's mum, who was an albino and they had an albino baby called Faye? But Mary-Alice is not described as albino... I has a confusion, but it'll probably be straightened out later on in the story. The tension mounts!

Signed,

Regina Philange

MCRmy Killjoy

*smiffles* That... was... so... SAD! How could... Tea... just let him... go... like that? And poor, poor Jenna... what will happen to them? Oh God, I hope Ryou and Seto and everyone survives! If they get killed off... I will be sad. But if they do... that shall be an EPIC scene. By the way, I didn't know you are a Yu-Gi-Oh! The Abridged Series fan! I love YGOTAS! Brooklyn rage! Screw the rules, I have money. Because shut up. Nyeh! FRIENDSHIP! 4Kids...

Signed,

Regina Philange

MCRmy Killjoy

Awww, Yami and Tea were so cute at the ice-cream bit! I think Atem was a bit harsh with Letia though... what did she do anyway? Huzzah, I get a kitty cat for reviewing! I shall name this kitty cat... Baby Panda. LOL it's funny because it's a PJ (Private Joke) from a previous chapter!

Signed,

Regina Philange and Baby Panda

MCRmy Killjoys

Oh my God! Seto, no! That chapter was one pure adrenaline rush... I very nearly had an aneurysm when I read this chapter. LOL I love how Mary-Alice is such a little bitch.

Signed,

Regina Philange

MCRmy Killjoy

(By the way, Regina Philange isn't my real name, it's my Killjoy name. If you don't know what that means, Google "My Chemical Romance, Danger Days: The True Lives of The Fabulous Killjoys". If you already do know what that means, what's your Killjoy name? Thanks again for the awesome story!)

I'm sorry, I'm sure you get this kind of thing all the time, but HOLY CRAP. You just wrote the best fanfic in existence. I'm only on Chapter 24 and I'm thinking, "WOAH. I WOULD VERY MUCH LIKE TO READ THE REST OF THIS INCREDIBLE STORY!" Mary-Alice seems like the perfect villain, Fae (or Faye, I'm not too sure how to spell it) is absolutely adorable, and I think it's GENIUS that you made Yugi, Atem and Yami and Ryou, Bakura and Akefia all different characters. That is pure skill. You should reallygive yourself a pat on the back, because this stuff is pure gold. Thank you for saying at the top whose POV the chapter is in, because I would have been very confused. Keep upthe great work, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Signed,

Regina Philange

MCRmy Killjoy

awesome wonder if letia and atemu will ever forgive each other?

Boy you choose: None. She's for (extra) laughs and humor. Though if need be...

First Name: Karin

Surname: Withers

Nickname(s): AGHH!, Ninja stalker,

Age: Fifteen

Eye Colour: green-gray

Hair Colour: Dark brown, bangs light brown

Complexion (Skin colour): light peach

Height: 5'5

Distinguishing Marks/Features: Not much, except for her bangs

Figure (Hourglass, Petite, Apple, Tomboy, Athletic, Willowy, or suggest your own): Tom-boy/athletic

Natural Hairstyle (Length, parting side, etc.): Waist-length, somewhat messy,

Preferred Hairstyle (Ponytail, ribbons etc): Pony-tail when necessary, (eating, costumes) and braid to bed

What she likes about chosen boy: N/A, unless there's some free-be (let me know)

What she DISlikes about chosen boy: See above

Why she likes chosen boy: Scroll up two questions

Status with chosen boy (Unconfessed, Unofficial, Dating, Engaged, Married etc.): ...

Basic Likes: Swords, knives, medieval weaponry, forums, playing match-maker, RPG, LARPing, steampunkness, Redwall,

Basic Dislikes: being alone, people who boss her around, people who think NInja_Stalker (screenname) is a boy, card duels (she can't duel), males more than six inches taller than her,

Personality Traits: She's loyal to her friends and family, can fix just about anything electronic.

Personality Flaws: She tends to hurt others without knowing, (the thread on panda and all that) will intentionally try to hurt/kill you if you're someone she doesn't like if she's in a bad mood and unintentionally if she's in a good mood (usually)

What Halloween Costume: Dark blue kimono with light blue flower pattern, the cliché samurai blade, dancing slippers (because sneakers won't work with this) hair in a loose ponytail, cherry blossom behind ear, the works. (going for female samurai. Think Sakura Taisan)

Siblings and cousins do not recognize on first glance. That much of a change

OMG! poor Jenna *laughs*

Jenna-*blushes*

Oh can Jenna be in the oneshot? Id fill out the form right now but..school/Eck

Omg! This chapter was late coming, but boy was it worth it! And I never expected it to be in GODRIC's POV! I don't even know where to start! There was so much! Touching father/daughter moments... I started crying, seriously. You really captured his pride and longing beautifully. And the opening! Wow, you really nailed Alice on the head: an angel, a tortured, confused angel... I just... Words escape me. And Seto, stoic as ever! Lmao! And Ryou and Faye were so brave! Standing up to Mary-Alice like that! Hmmm... What's to become of her now? And the Bakuras? And where's Marik? And will Seto be alright? Will Godric? Please update soon! The suspense is killing me! Awesome job! Happy writing!

I feel so bad for Letia! If she sides with Mary Alice she saves her dad, but then she loses Atem. But i have a feeling that Mary Alice isn't really going to pay her any money.

Also, I think the rating might need to go up...

Great Chapter!

awesome chapter as well.