Other than a few mistakes, I thought that was really cute! I think you portrayed their character very well.

Wow, I gotta say, you definitely pulled off their way of character perfectly XD. I can just imagine how the two would meet in the series. Rima and Shiki would find love at first sight by staring in each other's eyes. And it was cute of him sharing his pocky with her for the first time. Good job with this .

Awww... is this a first encounter between Rima and Shiki?

So cute! Loved it! This totally made my day... so captivating... :D :D :D :D :D

Shima 4eva

"After all, I had to save the pocky." XD that was hilarious, and made my day a little less crappy - 3 this story, Shiki x Rima forever!