|Reviews for It Was The Coffee|
| Nathaniel Cardeu 10/19/10 . chapter 1
This is good... a little confusing without reading the rest of the background; all the names, places, ranks etc are unusual and I lost track in the last big paragraph;
Pureblood Amel, he's Demish, ok when he was Von...
A bit lost on me at the moment :)
Think I might look into this series cos it sounds like it could be interesting.
Thanks for sharing.