 scarlet 4/20/12 . chapter 14 i luuv it xoooo much |
 Penelope Applegate 12/4/10 . chapter 14Awhhhh. So cute. Can't wait til they actually start to LIKE each other ( And I love her snark. |
 Jess 11/11/10 . chapter 14 Woo that was awesome pleez don't tell me it's over |
 Aeleita 11/10/10 . chapter 14Aww, cute! Shang is really nice. |
 BenRG 11/9/10 . chapter 13The thing that I would remind Jade is that some arranged marriages work and some don't. However, this is also true of other kinds of match. In the end, it isn't the way the two are brought together that matters, it is the level of effort that the two parties are willing to make to create a relationship and a bond.
Now, I have to say that your characterisation of Shang in this chapter was particularly worth a smile. It seems that he has inherited his father's (lack of) smoothness with ladies. What I think Jade should learn from this is that he is as nervous and, yes, afraid, as she is.
This story is going in interesting directions and I'm still reading. |
 ciccia96 11/7/10 . chapter 13Great chapter...they are soo cute together!
Update soon :) |
 ElementalGal 11/7/10 . chapter 12I love it! I've read it all, well, the stuff that's been posted! can't wait for your next update on this story :) |
 kido 11/7/10 . chapter 12 i think you should continue please i love how it all sounds so realistic but i think something dramatic should happen |
 ciccia96 11/7/10 . chapter 12great chapter..please update soon :) |
 Penelope Applegate 11/5/10 . chapter 11Awhhh heehee.
Can't wait yo see where this is going :) SO cute! |
 BenRG 11/5/10 . chapter 11Shang is probably confused because he doesn't know what a betrothal necklace is. He'll have to ask Katara for more details (and /that/ will be an... er... interesting conversation). Then he'll probably ask Zuko who'll be... Zuko. The practical upshot of this is a necklace of Dragon-hide with a medalion of gold forged in Shang's own Fire. Because Zuko was always one for dramatic demonstrations and he'll want Shang to do the same thing.
So, Shang was the one in Jade's dream! This could ultimately turn out to be a seriously Bad Thing, given the actual content of that dream. |
 BenRG 11/5/10 . chapter 10The key word in this chapter is 'gossip'. I'll bet that's why Aang and Zuko went ahead with this: They've assumed from the rumours about Jade and Shang that the two of them actually are in a relationship.
The thing is... I'm not sure that they're wrong! ;-) |
 Aeleita 11/4/10 . chapter 11Short and sweet. I enjoyed that./ |
 Aeleita 10/28/10 . chapter 10I'm liking this. |
 ciccia96 10/24/10 . chapter 10great story...please update soon
p.s. sorry my reviews are short
ciccia_96 :) |