 bitchboughtmycookie 4/9/09 . chapter 2*was not expecting HiroxK at all*
*is not sure what I was expecting*
*is gonna stop babbling now*
Good fic, but the chapters are kinda short, but it works :D |
 writing.in.a.tree 12/28/07 . chapter 4its a plotless wonder. definitely. a very good plotless wonder.
i like the mika/tohma pairing. could possibly make a plotless wonder focusing on THEM? you make very good plottless wonders, after all.. |
 shubaby 1/20/07 . chapter 4 NO IT CANT BE OVER YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! please and thank you
MuchLuv - |
 Alexa.G 4/4/06 . chapter 4Awesome ending! _ |
 wendyghost 4/29/05 . chapter 4wow is shu going to get in trouble? |
 Chizuko313 3/19/05 . chapter 4That's the end! What are you thinking you were doing great but then you just end it with no sex! Why is this in the rated R section? it doesn't have explicit content or even bad language you confuse me this wasn't plotless at all it had a story line but it never had a climax or problem or an end. you had ryu slashed with shu but never did a thing besides whats normal for ryu to act like around shu I don't want to be mean but i'm disapointed i guess the suspense of who hiro was datting was good though |
 Stepher-chan39 11/6/04 . chapter 4c'mon u have to continue it... u really do, or make a sequel! its so good! dont end it! |
 DarkasNight 8/16/04 . chapter 4MORE! write more gravi! |
 Mrs.ShinjiroAragaki 8/10/04 . chapter 4Very nice! |
 Mrs.ShinjiroAragaki 8/10/04 . chapter 3the chappies are short, but that makes it suspenseful! keep it up! |
 Mrs.ShinjiroAragaki 8/10/04 . chapter 2oh yeah a fic with K-sama my fave character!
off to read other chappie! It's getting good! |
 Mrs.ShinjiroAragaki 8/10/04 . chapter 1Aw don't leave me in suspense! Now I must go read the other chappies! |
 slytherindreams 2/15/04 . chapter 4 *sorry.. i didn't feel like loging in* I loved this! isn't kuma-kun adorable! *sigh* I dont care if he is 'out there' it just makes him even more irrisistable when he's serious! |
 Bree In Diamonds 1/22/04 . chapter 4excellent work! loved it |
 Ryah 9/2/03 . chapter 4 Heh- a very sweet fanfic (with a very cute Ryuichi and his darling Kumagorou). But it does make you wonder- how could have Hiro told Ayaka that he was seeing someone else... |