*was not expecting HiroxK at all*
*is not sure what I was expecting*
*is gonna stop babbling now*
Good fic, but the chapters are kinda short, but it works :D

its a plotless wonder. definitely. a very good plotless wonder.
i like the mika/tohma pairing. could possibly make a plotless wonder focusing on THEM? you make very good plottless wonders, after all..

NO IT CANT BE OVER YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! please and thank you
~MuchLuv~ ^-^

Awesome ending! ^_^

wow is shu going to get in trouble?

That's the end!? What are you thinking you were doing great but then you just end it with no sex! Why is this in the rated R section? it doesn't have explicit content or even bad language you confuse me this wasn't plotless at all it had a story line but it never had a climax or problem or an end. you had ryu slashed with shu but never did a thing besides whats normal for ryu to act like around shu I don't want to be mean but i'm disapointed i guess the suspense of who hiro was datting was good though

c'mon u have to continue it... u really do, or make a sequel! its so good! dont end it!

MORE! write more gravi!

Very nice!

the chappies are short, but that makes it suspenseful! keep it up!

oh yeah a fic with K-sama my fave character!!
off to read other chappie! It's getting good!!

Aw don't leave me in suspense!! Now I must go read the other chappies!

*sorry.. i didn't feel like loging in* I loved this!! isn't kuma-kun adorable! *sigh* I dont care if he is 'out there' it just makes him even more irrisistable when he's serious!

excellent work! loved it

Heh- a very sweet fanfic (with a very cute Ryuichi and his darling Kumagorou). But it does make you wonder- how could have Hiro told Ayaka that he was seeing someone else...