i really loved this one..

the stuff with t'pol trying to learn how to woo was just priceless and funny.

i could almost see it happening this way too..

i hope you continue this story some more..

please..

Nicely wrote. A little more graphic in nature than I like, but, iteresting none the less. One thing though. Vulcans usually mildmeld during coplulation from what I remember. That would have been interesting. Maybe even having Trip resist the contact a little because of his last experiences with a telepath. But I'm not trying to be critical of the story, just throwing some ideas your way! (I'll be the screen door..."LOL)

I have to disagree with the last review. Archer

strikes me as the kind of person who cares a lot, but isn't going to stick his nose where it doesn't

belong...at least as far as the romance lives of his crew. Personally approving and helping a friend don't always go hand in hand.

As far as the love thing...I thought I made it

very clear that T'Pol had found happiness but

was not counting on it lasting. It's a new experience for her and love can work fast for the

newly initiated. Perhaps a later chapter with a falling out might work..but I don't like those kinds of stories.

Q

The first two chapters of the story were good (even though I don't really see Archer approving of a Trip/T'Pol relationship) But the ending was very cliched. The would be playful, passionate, curious and adventurous, but practically in love? Nah.

WeeHa!

deff NC-17

Loved it. More Vulcan "Porno" please!

Wow! I can't believe that all happened in three chapters. Nice job, haha. Well I think this was a great story. It was quiet touching, but I do agree you might wanna change the rating. Just a thought. The story was still really really good.

I love this story. It is riveting. You definately need to write more!

I loved the story, but I notice the rating is still PG...maybe it should be R or NC17?

Excellent ending

Oh wow! This story is SO good so far! It's totally cracking me up! You really have to write more very soon 'cause I'm DYING to see how this is all gonna work out here..haha, anyways, good job! Keep up the good work!

What did he tell her to do? Armed combat to the death...*snort*...Gotta love her!

Hilarious! Especially since you've kept everyone in character so well. But where's the rest?

lmao! he he he, that was great. There *will* be more, correct? I mean, you can't just leave it like that! *sniff* Pretty please? Can you be bribed? :) Seriously, great story, I'll be checking back. :)

Other than the fact that this is a Trip/T'Pol story, ;) I'm liking it alot! I can't tell you specifically what unfortunetly, it's just all coming together nicely.

great story. the only problem I can see is that it stopped :) cant wait for more