|Reviews for End of Eternity|
| ressax 11/7/10 . chapter 25
Awesome chapter. I liked the ending "so the danger was over after all." If you do a sequel. An idea is to go back to that sentence. And have something happen. It doesn't have to right after that sentence. It could be a flashback or something. But thats an idea. If you do a sequel can't wait to read it. An alternative ending? Hmm. I think half of the story was the fact that the boys were there. Besides, the girls got kidnapped because of grudges. Maria and all the other kidnappers needed the boys there.
| Just4Me 11/7/10 . chapter 25
I like how you left it open so that maybe Casimir didn't die after all. Thanks for a really fun story!
| twilight642531 11/7/10 . chapter 25
awesome! i would love to see the alternative ending, maybe you could also do a one-shot about ho Casimir came to light with Maria if you wanted to. :)
| Gingerslytherin 11/5/10 . chapter 24
i love this story and i think a sequel would be awesome but its ur choice
| ressax 11/5/10 . chapter 24
I think you should do one more chapter. It doesn't seem like it should go to the epilogue next. You should do a nessie pov. About Casimer. Can't wait till epilogue
| Just4Me 11/5/10 . chapter 24
Poor Casimir. Is he really dead? Or did he do something to Jane? I know we're not supposed to like immortal children, but I think it would be hard to kill them.
| dont say 11/5/10 . chapter 24
you should write a sequel
| ressax 11/1/10 . chapter 23
The last few chapters did seem to be rushed. Maybe you should do a plan or something. I know that plans are annoying and all that. But how about you do a must include list. And stick to it. Just an idea. I'm interested in Casimir, he sounds like he'll be a sweet character!
| Just4Me 11/1/10 . chapter 23
I am still LOVING this story. I think you have an incredible imagination, and a real talent for telling a good story. Re-writing and tightening your previous chapters can't hurt, and can only help you grow as a writer. I don't think any of your work is rubbish, and you should stop putting yourself down. I wish I had your gift!
| SAM HOPSON 11/1/10 . chapter 22
i think you should update your chapters more often.
and you know you cant just stop you've got readers to your book you have RESPONSABILITY now.
please update further
| Gingerslytherin 10/29/10 . chapter 22
i love this story its amazing update soon please :D
| PrimevalIsMyNameAndILoveBecker 10/27/10 . chapter 22
AHHH CONTINUE PLEASE! I'M BEGGING ON MY KNEES!
| dontreallywanatellyouthat 10/21/10 . chapter 22
i liked it keep on going
| aby 10/20/10 . chapter 22
Didn't think I'd ever say this, but I'm so bored! UPDATE!
| no name 10/19/10 . chapter 22
Congrats, you made it ove a 100 reviews with this story!