 theultamitedocfan 7/9/09 . chapter 5 DUDE MAKE A SEQUEL AND WHAT EVER HAPPENED TO EDWARDS FOSTER PARENTS? |
 Cielo VII 10/6/07 . chapter 5whoa, damn! is there gonna be a threesome? please say yes. WOOT! i love this story |
 Erica 7/11/07 . chapter 5 Ok, I don't think that adding the "_" was a smart thing to do...And you forgot to capitalize the letter at the start of certain sentences. Messy messy messy teehee.
This story seemed to go VERY fast and everything happened so abruptly, but keep working on it! I totally want a sequel, but not in that bogus play format...I think you should write it out to make it less confusing and more interesting. |
 Angelic Gargoyle Artemis 6/25/07 . chapter 5That was cute and sweet. Good job! |
 SatoXDaiKazaXRikuou 4/7/05 . chapter 5 aw! huggles for everyone! very well told and very cute! love ur writing style! plz, plz do us all a sequel! (*gets huge puppy dog eyes*) pawez, with sugars on top! :) |
 thepurplehippy 7/1/04 . chapter 5sequel!sequel!sequel!
we want a sequel! |
 GhostHelwig 4/7/04 . chapter 5I noticed that this story hasn't been updated in a while, but I hope that just means I have to search out the sequel, because I'd hate for the story to stop here! Ed & Eddy both in love with Double D - and who does he love? I'd really love to know! I hope you continue writing! |
 TullulaBell69 9/8/03 . chapter 5Man! That kicked serious ass! you gotta do a sequel! that was so cute.. omg omg omg! i love it! I'm speechless it was so good! not aying that i thought this story would suck or somethin' just sayin' it kicked ass! SEQUEL! |
 IamVeird 5/1/03 . chapter 4 Dude that was really touching, pleze make another. |
 2 lazy 2 loginDouble-D Kutie 3/21/03 . chapter 5 Um...well it was a good story but...well...that gay thing it just was a little different. BUT you are a really good writer just dont turn Double-D gay. I REALLY LIKE HIM THE WAY HE IS! |
 lauren 1/3/03 . chapter 5 SEQUEL! PLEASE! i love this fic! i wanna know what happens! eeee im hyper...MORE FICCIE! i *heart* ed hes my fave . |
 Double D to da 3 11/2/02 . chapter 5 GREAT STORY! I actually started to CRY during the Double D/Ed farewell scene! Nice work! |
 zach 10/21/02 . chapter 5 hey! good story! You must add a sequel.
I'm gay so I enjoy it |
 Kichara 10/10/02 . chapter 5Awwww, it's kyoot! But, you can't just end off here! What's gonna happen to Edd? C'mon, you can't just leave me standed like this! *laughs* Oh, and as a little note, your story flows much better when you use quotation marks rather than colon's when characters are speaking. Cute story, keep up the good work! |
 Kichara 10/10/02 . chapter 2Awwww, poor Double D! Somebody needs a huuuuug! I really am liking this, though. The guys are all very much in character, very nicly put. I'm just a little disapointed by the shortness of the chapters. I hope you update a lot. Whelp, onto the next chapter! |