It is TOO a great poem! I love free-verse poetry, and this is a beautiful example of one. Sirius has gone through quite a lot, hasn't he? Poor baby. Regardless, you worded this poem very well, and you should be proud of it. Good job! Keep up the wonderful writing.

*StarWolf*

hmm not bad. just a little disturbing though... but nicely worded. keep at it

It shouldn't be rated R it's just...disturbing, but I like it! Your poems are great!

It shouldn't be rated R it's just...disturbing, but I like it! Your poems are great!