Nice Background story. Aunque no esta la thundercat que se enfrenta y vence al control mental declarandose como la mas fuerte de su especie que ponen en duda en origins por cierto. aunque es extraño que vea a Kit mala desde la visión de los gemelos mas chicos tendría mas sentido si los viera cuando se los llevan a la pirámide en un masr de lágrimas mientras Cheetara exige ser llevada a las minas dejandolos a su suerte literalmente. Falta incluir la parte cuando MumRa molesta a los gemelos diciendoles que integrara a Cheetara al entournage.

This was wonderful! I love the way you write!

You...you... you sonofa! I thought this would be just a background story for Cheetara, and that part is very good, actually, but then you throw in that epilogue and you... Aaaah! You just had to go and made me cry with that, didn't you?

Seeing how happy things were at the beginning between Cheetara and baby Kit... you just had to show where the motherly love Cheetara feels for Kit started, didn't you? And then seeing what happens in Embracing Dark Desires is such a big contrast!

I mean, seeing this little baby WilyKit, how she is so happy and loved and then she grows up and goes on to do those terrible things! It's so sad! It's so tragic! It makes me feel so bad for Cheetara! It even made me cry a little because we know we can't change what's going to happen! It's freaking genius! I love it!

Thank you for this one-shot! You are one of the very few authors I've seen who can twist emotions into fanfics like this, Thanks!

Thank you for the tender side-story (even if the undertones of "Embracing Dark Desires" are still present). It literally kindles an imperceptible flame of hope on the relationship between Cheetara and WilyKit; and that brings, at the same time, a sadder note of tragedy. I certainly feel ambivalent about the future of those two after reading this one-shot of yours.

Cheers.

Wow, I loved it. You should write more stories like this. I love stories about old Thundera with characters other than the Thundercats. Nice back story on Cheetara.

Your Embracing Dark Desires story rocks and so does this one!

Please, please write more!