|Reviews for Scar|
| x tricksie x 6/25/12 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. I think you portrayed Alf perfectly here. I had the same "Awwe :(" reaction here as I did so many times during the game. Poor Alf!
| StarWarriorEevee 6/1/11 . chapter 1
. i want it longer. :(
| Colette's a Bimbo 2/7/11 . chapter 1
Omg! This is soooooo romantic and cute! i luv arf and this fanfic was awesomely awesome! Also, arguably insane... really? Mentally psychotic would fit her more. Plz write more! also can u write one about weiss serge or niko? Please? Those three are my absolute favorite characters in arf. Niko comes second after zelos from tos in my fav. list :)) well done!
| Secondhand Soul 1/17/11 . chapter 1
You really get into Alf's head. I like it.
Oh, and I do care that you love Alf, because I love him, too. I also call it ARF. XP
| Aesthetic Acting 1/8/11 . chapter 1
Very cute, I like it. I personally enjoyed the word choice. Alf and Adele's relationship is adorable, although very much onesided, as you accurately portrayed.
| Aida Rosaura 11/27/10 . chapter 1
Indeed I do totally use that acronym, but only in my head :P And I am in love with Alf as well! Peace out, sister.
Anyway, to the review part of the review :D I really enjoyed reading your fanfic. Even though it's a little bit on the short side, it was the perfect length for what you were trying to accomplish. Ever read a long oneshot that bored you to tears? Yeah, I know I have (but we're going to ignore the fact that it was probably one of my own...) :P
Alf's character was portrayed very well here too, and the only suggestion I may have for you is that some of the sentences got a bit confusing. Try to keep it nice and simple. Your idea was so impeccable though that it wasn't a big deal at all! The sadness and the tone of the ending made it quite satisfying to read.
Overall, really great work. Thank you! I hope to read more ARF fanfiction from you in the future!
PS. Arguably insane? Try clinically psychotic! XD
| fowl68 10/23/10 . chapter 1
You did an awesome job of showing Alf's loyalty, despite the situation. Very well-written, but it did seem to be just a little bit dry. 9/10
Ah, and do you have any advice for defeating Papirusagu?
| Midnight Reicheru 10/16/10 . chapter 1
This story is so cute. I love Arc Rise Fantasia so much and was so happy when I saw there were a few fanfics. The ARF comment made me laugh really hard. I love the pairing Alf/Adele! Good job!
| Martin III 10/15/10 . chapter 1
Not bad. The chief problem is that the writing is rather clunky. The line "All innocent traits have left her" is particularly awkward, and "but he had no intentions of putting his mental fabrications to a halt" is a good example of loading down a simple statement with over-elaborate wording. Simply "but he didn't care" would say the same thing.
Good depiction of Alf, though, and you've wisely avoided the glaring contradictions in his character from the game.