Tokka.

Awwww. Cute Kataang.

Brilliant! "Toph hadn't heard someone speak with so many italics since the last time she encountered Azula."
I love that line.

I laughed so hard at the end it brought tears to my eyes. Good job!

Gahhhh why haven't I reviewed this? Maybe I did over on dA...ah, well. I was just in the mood for some fanfiction, but didn't want to sift through 50 million crapfics (and I've already done enough creeping on you this month XD) so I reread the last chapter of Book 4. That was fine, but after a couple hours I had to come back and read this. An hour well spent, I'd say.

A few typos, as usual, but nothing that really takes away from the story. Mai's rendition of 'previously' was amazing, and everyone was in character the entire time. The bit with the Zutara bath was highly enjoyable, and Suki is adorbaly paranoid. My one minor issue with this is some unclear dialogue. For example, at the end of chapter 8, it goes something along the lines of:

"Aang, we're cool just as long as we get back together."

"Sounds fair," said Aang.

"I'm always right."

"Good boy."

The last couple lines confuse me. But then, I'm easily confused. I really do wonder if I haven't already reviewed this...hmm. Either way, loved the fic. :)

Oh, and I apologize for not responding to your replies. I'm not entirely sure how. -.-"

amusement, i get a lot of that when i read this

was the whole thing a lead-up to the end, haaa that was funny

I THOUGHT THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A ZUTARA! IT'S TURNING OUT TO BE MORE MAIKO AND KATAANG THAN ZUTARA! I'M DISSAPOINTED!

Just...awww...I loved this chapter. Sweet and comforting without being sappy

another unexpected singer - or hummer or whatever - but how did sokka know it was toph? anyway good chaper

ahhhhhh katang! ahhhh but still mai singing didn't expect that . . . COOL! BD

did mai fall off the air ship? please please please tell me thats what happend

Definitely enjoying this fic. Everyone is kept seamlessly in character. Also awesome how your turning the shipping circles into your own personal playground, yet still leaving it right where it was at the end of Book 4 chapt. 8. Thus not diverging from where 8 left off and where 9 will begin (someday.)

I know you can't continue this mini-fic forever, but I do hope to see even a little bit more before you conclude it. Would also very much enjoy seeing another "Book 4: The lost days of..." later on down the line.

heh...It's always easy to tell someone it's not a big deal when it's not happening to you. Fun chapter, jealous Zuko is cute, but Mai would pin him to the wall if he did it around her.

Momo is such an underappreciated character. XD

Awesome as usual. I love how you write his point of view."Giant Warm Friend Protector Appa" sweet and funny at the same time.

And of course, Mai's "previously on Avatar" section was made of win.