this story was realy good. i like the lines that you picked to use from the movie

that last line is so sweet, and a perfect way to end it

Okay, I'm pretty brain dead, so I'm apologizing in advance for the lame review. /

This was a really good two-shot. :D I really like how she got flashes of what had happened before Dastan went back in time and changed it all! Such a relief to him, I'm sure.

I just watched "Prince of Persia" twice this weekend (the first time with a group of people, the second time with just my sisters so we could see parts we missed), so I'm really new to reading fics based on the movie.

But this is great! You're a very good writer, and captured the characters so well. :) You may have inspired me to write a fic of my own, despite my ongoing writer's block.

Thank you for writing this story, I enjoyed it. :D

it's a good story... will there be more?

Aww, thanks for the new chap.) I think you could have put more detail in, but really, the fic is fine. ) And my critic is buried deep, so yeah.

Hope you write more for this fandom! What about a missing scene from the movie? I'm trying to do one of those, love Dastamina squabbles. hehe, hope you get a plot bunny attack)

Wonderful fic.D

amazing

Awww... I'm sorry you feel that this is not your best work, but I personally LOVED it! Very nicely written and I could actually feel the pain and the angst when I read it. That to me makes it an instant winner in my book! :)

Sorry to see that this fic is at an end though. But... no matter, I look forward to more stories from you! :D

Happy writing!

Very cute(:

AWWW beautiful chapter and yes i teared up at the end would love to see it continued but if not still loved it

naaw. she remembered and he cried. love it.

Oooh... this was wonderful and very well-written! I loved it. Nice work and I look forward to more from you. :)

No flames or complaints here. That was really sweet. :)

Loved it! cant wait for more x

aww, you shouldn't invite flames, this is too good. Dun ever give a reason for flamers more reason to hurt. Critiscm, hell yes, but flames, no way.

I loved it! So cute. But you can't leave us there, what happened? How does Tamina react to everything? You've got my dying for more! Hehe, I totally know, POP is just so addictive, I still haven't gotten over the obsession, and its been months!

The song is certainly great. Alanis Morrisette rocked once more. It toally summed up Tamina through the movie.D

Hope you write more please!

It's not a bad thing when you cry while you're writing something. It makes it more genuine, in a way. This was really good :)