Is this the Raphael/Sara you've been talking about? If so, I think it's turned out really well.

I mean, I can't comment on the connections to the canon all that well, but it's very nice writing. I think the best way to describe it is lyrical. I also like the way you have the 'miss whatever' as the passage of time. It's a very good way to show the way that days flip by without it being to jarring.

All in all, it's a lovely little fic, that I really enjoyed reading, but then I like reading all of your stuff, so... yeah.