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| Reviews for The Forbidden Kingdom 2 New and Updated Version |
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  Bader 3/27/13 . chapter 14 When are u gonna finish the story? Its been a while since you last edited |
| Gharvey 1/26/13 . chapter 13 Please finish it was good |
 Love Hates Life So Stop Crying 8/11/12 . chapter 3I always wanted to read a spin-off of the Forbidden Kingdom. I loved the White-Haired Witch. She was totally badass, with her whip and wicked dress. I think you have done a really great job so far, and I hope you continue. I like that there is pretty much no spelling errors, and real question marks. *applause* Perfect. |
| LittleMargarita 4/21/12 . chapter 2 Interesting... |
| LittleMargarita 4/21/12 . chapter 2 Interesting... |
| LittleMargarita 4/21/12 . chapter 1 Off to a good start...I'll definitely keep reading...Im intrigued... |
| Dragon Reverb 8/8/11 . chapter 11 2 and what army..? 0.0 LOl UPDATE! |
| Guest 6/28/11 . chapter 10 Holy crap, how did it take me this long to read your chapter? Somehow the notification got lost in my email inbox. ; As always, you had pulled out another interesting chapter. You're good, because you keep leaving me wanting to know what's going to happen next! I'm excited to see where the story goes. And I foresee Lupo being an amusing development. :) Cheers, RAH |
| Rebel-Angel-Hero 6/6/11 . chapter 9 LULZ. Yay for drunk fighting! And for Lu Yan messing with Lupo. :D Revenge is definitely a dish best served cold. Or, in this case, soaked with wine. :) Lovely chapter, as always. Sorry it's taken me so long to review! ; Cheers, RAH |
| katnip97 5/29/11 . chapter 9 *Chuckle* Excellent! I haven't been getting online much reccently (and less soon) but I enjoy this story when I get to read it! Awesome as always! Cheers, Miss Edit |
| InsanityByDefinition 5/15/11 . chapter 8 Oooohhh, Ni-Chang with a twist. Me like. |
| GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON 4/21/11 . chapter 8 I like how you written this and introducing the asian mythology into it. Hope you bring Lu Yan in the story he is one of my favourite characters in the film. Please do more |
| katnip97 4/21/11 . chapter 8 An excellent chapter, Firestar's Niece! I really like how you write. It's very...complete. Like you have everything planned out. It has structure. 5/5 stars! I'm cheering you on! Cheers, Miss Edit |
| Rebel-Angel-Hero 4/18/11 . chapter 8 Ack! You updated before I could get to Chapter 6! You sneaky, you... Well, I'm enjoying the story, as always. I liked the twist you put on Ni Chang, making her a former goddess. And Jason and Emily/Sparrow are cute, as always. Amaterasu does seem a little weepy, though. But if that's what you're going for, then that's fine. Keep up the good work, dear! I look forward to the next chapter. Cheers, RAH |
| katnip97 4/8/11 . chapter 6 *Grin* Excellent chapter! It was rather irksome that Emily/Golden Sparrow didn't remember who she was. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter! I know, you just recently updated it, but I want to read more! More, more, more! Cheers, Miss Edit |
