I love how you wrote this. Especially with the parenthetical asides. Excellent job.

Fantastic story! I loved it, and I can see a relationship between Grier and Ginn developing just as you described. You should be doing script writing for the show. Hope you didn't kill her and that we will be able to read a sequel soon.

Amazing. Really amazing. Your Greer is so perfectly drawn, and you gave life (and death, I guess!) to a character I barely noticed at all. Well done.

J.