Awwww. :) Not too mushy. I like it You have a unique way of phrasing things without making them too heavy. Nicely done.

Bwahhhh! I Woves it! :) it made me happy and giggle inside. Awesome story, tho im slightly confuse, what was it with the part about Mitsukuni's toothache? Anyways, loved it, and keep writing!

Ja ne

Kat/Reana-chan

LOVE it! So pure and lovely, and it's about one of my favourite episodes :D I can't say much more apart from the fact that it is a gorgeous little thing and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I want to adopt Honey even more now. I do hope you are well, and thank you for making me smile with this little gem :)

*Is startled by this ficlet*

I love me some Ouran High! And I'm really gutted the series was ended even though the manga is classified as ongoing. Tamachan, Fred and George *smirk* and Devil- wears- Glasses, you are all sorely missed 3

That said, I'm not so big on the Loli-kid and his protector, I think Japan's obsession with Loliconism is creepy, and I don't think Mori-senpai brings much to the table, what with hardly speaking and all. All of which is quite unfortunate, since this one-shot is all about them *guilty chuckle*

I can't say that they don't share a really cute dynamic on the show, though, and you've quite captured it here( Hmm, I seem to have missed the fact that they're cousins, somehow.) I chuckled when Honey said he wasn't hungry enough to eat a plain old orange. I imagine the "Momma" and "Daddy" of the club woulda been real busy that day; I find it quite amusing to picture Momma calculating all the money she would be making from exploiting Daddy on Valentine's _

Happy Writing!

That was sweet, and insightful. I liked Mori's dream - it was funny and actually made sense.