Te felicito por tu historia. Es la primera vez que leo sobre esta pareja y me gusto MUCHO. Actualizolo lo antes que puedas, por favor.

P.D: Tengo una duda. ¿Halibel es una reencarnacion de la Espada, su vida anterior o otra cosa?

oooooooh, LOVE IT! Great fic. I adore your writing and I cant wait for the next chapter!

pretty intersting please update

I really like this fic. I like the pace you have in the story so far.

I really hope you will keep on releasing chapters for this story.

You're great in keeping Kisame in character:).

this fic just keeps getting more interesting.

i lmao when halibel vommitted!

Good story. I actually had the idea of having Kisame and Harribel meet up as well. I really like Harribel. (She's too good for him. *pout*) Still, nicely done and keep it up.

Great chapter, keep it up!

Good interlude, we saw a softer side from the "shark of the mist." I'm anxious as to where the story will go next

Nice story, keep it up!

haha, Kisame is so badass, just flinging Halibel towards the ninja like nothing. Can't wait to read more of this story

yay! a kisame halibel fic! great chapter!

Hmm... interesting premise for a crossover. I'm very intrigued to see where this is headed. I enjoyed the fight scene, brief as it was, and I think it's a good precedent for where the action of the story will be headed.

I did have an issue toward the end (where you mentioned the konoha medic), it was a tad confusing. You may want to take a look at that paragraph. It was little bit rush. I'm also a person who disproves of the use of All Caps in yelling. I'm a believer that the exclamation point is more than enough, but it is up to author preference. Your imagery is also fairly well structured, which is refresh compared to a majority of the stories on here. It's not congruent through the entire chapter, but I did enjoy your descriptions of the lake scene.

This story is definitely intriguing, and I wait for the next update.

..akward.

i've always wanted to read about a couple like this. i've hardly come across crossovers like this. but i found one. yay! XD

First crossover I review... this is pretty good. Was that Halibel's projectil azul that she fired at the water clone of Kisame? Anyways, can't wait to read more of this