Why did you stop! I wanna know what's going to happen! -says something only Vegeta would say- "I demand you continue this now! For I will not be kept here wondering what is to happen!" Any way.. Please continue! I wanna know!

Yeah, I like it so far. I just love V/T bonding stories, and I like the mushy ones. You know, I think Vegeta should be a little OOC sometimes in these kinds of stories. He hasn't been too much in this one yet, but I've got a feeling he will be soon. Anyway, hope you update soon. I'll be waiting.

Tilea out.

Dude...dude...WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT? WRITE MORE! MORE MORE MORE!...more.

I really love this! updation needed

Please hurry and make more stories and

chapters! I LOVE THEM SOO MUCH!

Man, I really hope you continue this. I've never read a similar fic anywhere and in a fandom this big, that's a rarity.

This is really good! I love this, keep going...

is there going to be more? I hope so it seems ti be off to such a great start please continue?

*gasp!* Vegeta *DOES* have a heart!

*giggles*

I like! Continue!

Ayod

This is really beautiful. One of my best friends died of leaukaemia, so it's like that. Make his last months his best..

OO;;;;;;;

So sad... :,(...

But beautiful sorry _

I like th eway Vegeta reacts towards Mirai-Trunks. But I'd have liked to learn more about the desease Mirai-Trunks got.

Is this a novel from which you'll write a complete story or do you let it as it? :)

Keep up the great work :D

Write more that was cool.

OMG! Your going to let Trunks... (insert river of tears)I'm not even going to say it. Please write more!

aww...poor trunks...but shame on him for giving up so easily...aww...this is soooooo kawaii!

aww...poor trunks...but shame on him for giving up so easily...aww...this is soooooo kawaii!