   Leira Sedohr 1/10/06 . chapter 3Oh wait nvm on that last comment it was part of the story. hehe mine B. XD |
| Leira Sedohr 1/10/06 . chapter 2 I was reading And I don't know if I got this part, But I saw " I hate Yoshies" ... Now do you really hate yoshi or was that just part of the story? |
| anonymous 1/30/03 . chapter 3 good, but you should try adding mario. afterall, this is a mario fic. |
| JojoDark 4/13/02 . chapter 3 _ I loved Yoshi's Story! It's great that you're doing a fanfic about it! Hope you update! Well good job so far! |
| Robert Williams 3/27/02 . chapter 3 A bit confusing, but really good. |
| Jesness 3/27/02 . chapter 3 You're a big fan of bakwards talking huh?
"You may laugh, you may play
But your darker sides will be mine today" Mwa,ha,ha,ha! Er, sorry bout that evil cackling I got a little caught up in this great story... |
| BabyCharmander 3/24/02 . chapter 2 Waitaminute... If dis story is like the actual game... THEN THERE IS A PURPLE YOSHI! YEAH! *yanks the Paper Mario game outta her N64 and puts in the Yoshi's Story game, and gets out the Yoshi's Story Official Nintendo Player's guide* Yeah! I wanna Purple Yoshi! |
| Jesness 3/10/02 . chapter 2 Uh oh a crack in the egg? That can't be good. Very good in the second chapter. I hope the Purple Yoshi will be ok |
| Robert 3/5/02 . chapter 2 Good. |
| Rachelle Davison 3/4/02 . chapter 2 Aww, I really like this so far! It's gotta be one of the best Yoshi's Story explainions/fics I've ever read, and it seems like you're only getting warmed up. Awesome! |
| Jesness 3/4/02 . chapter 1 very catchy and cute but scince you didn't write it I guess this review goes to who ever did. |
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