nice

Since the chapter came out there have been a ton of these, but I like yours because it's the only one so far in Rukia's point of view. Of course they will see each other again, so it's not completely bittersweet, but it was definitely a moving chapter.

Good work, keep it up.

After 423 came out, i knew fanfiction would be overflowing with stories on whatifs and such, and i was in such a depressed mood that i had to come and read them all. Well, your story is real good. I love how you start with Bye Rukia and end with Bye Ichigo. Also, many other of the fanfics ive read are in ichigo's pov, but Rukia has to be thinking something too in this emotional time. Anyway, the picture of Ichigo and Rukia saying goodbye is my new dasktop. But still, this isnt really good bye cause she can always get a gigai and come visit him, right?

i'm sure, in the end, they will be together

so

don't worry