|Reviews for Dawn of Darkness|
| ellen 4/29/12 . chapter 6
I thought you never dropped a story?
| lala 12/2/11 . chapter 6
| kate 8/30/11 . chapter 6
SO, I meant to review a long time ago, but this was awesome, but i can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep writing this story! It's too good to not finish.
| kate 4/1/11 . chapter 5
Brilliant. I just love Jack's competitive spirit, and I can't wait until you have time to write more Good job!
| elizaII 4/1/11 . chapter 5
Awesome, I really love your OC world... Many can't pull that off without making a fool of themselves xD. And I think that your story should get more attention, seriously :O It's soooo good
Hope you'll update soon!
| yen 2/2/11 . chapter 4
When ya gonna update? Hmm?
| kate 1/16/11 . chapter 4
I do hope you're updating soon. I liked this chapter, but it felt a tad short. Not that I don't appreciate that you have a life that doesn't revolve around fanfiction. I just really like this story and am emotionally committed. I'm curious to see more of Jack's interactions with the death eaters, and in general hope to see him own it. However, I completely appreciate that you've given it a certain amount of realism. No matter how brilliant, he's still a 14-year-old. I love Tom and Jack. They're my favorite, and the addition of Diego is just great.
Like I said, the only thing I'd like more of is movement out of this period of uncertainty. We know that life is about to change for Jack, but it hasn't yet. Not that much, anyway. It feels like more time is spent in England with characters whose lives are already somewhat defined by this being fanfiction. However, if you're merely building suspense...I'm all for it.
| elizaII 12/30/10 . chapter 4
| kate 12/20/10 . chapter 3
Please update soon! I'm dying to hear what happens.
| laklak 11/16/10 . chapter 3
story going on well so far..
| laklak 11/9/10 . chapter 2
waiting 4 harrys part
| shannon 10/28/10 . chapter 2
Oh, I just love this story! Thanks for updating!
| Kate 10/10/10 . chapter 1
This is fantastic! It seemed a little rushed, but I can't wait for the next chapter. You always have me on the edge of my seat. Hopefully for less time, this time.
| Pop.Princess88 10/7/10 . chapter 1
Amazing I just love it!