Amazing chapter. laughing at the face that Abby screamed that Tonys delicious hot body was on her bed. I could just imagine Abby saying something like that.

"Well, I think that we should go shopping," Ziva said.

"I don't think I mentioned shopping," Tony said.

"I think it would be fun!" Ziva said.

"For you or for me?" Tony asked.

"For me..duh," Ziva said dragging him towards the small board walk.
Perfect boyfriend right there

No, it's Jesus.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh you make me laught! I think my mom thinks I am crazy now... Oh well TIVA FOREVER

I KNEW YOU THOUGHT I LOOKED GODLY!" OMG! Best line I have EVER read

Very cute. I'm sensing a sequel? Tony and ziva are really cute as teens. I was having a little trouble seeing ziva as more fragile and young instead of ninja assassin but you did we'll. oh and I was totally banking on them getting married to get ziva to stay but I guess it's better they didn't yet. Lovely story and thanks for sharing

I've just read all 18 chapters I loved this story I had a big smile on my face I just loved how Tony and Ziva fell in love brilliant. hope you will write more stories

Beyond amazing story well worth reading! :D Thank you for writing such an awesome story can't wait for you to update to read more i am serious hooked! :D!

WOW! loved the story and i dont normaly read the High school ones but i loved it

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I'm totally obsessed with the story (:

Love everything about it. Especially Tiva! ;D

And Abby. Coz she's awesummmmmm (:

Keep writing or else :P

U r so great at what u do and ur writing is so...u have depth and if you think a about it u could picture it happening an i love it! keep up the great work u r amazing! never stop writing i hope some day i will see your face on a book!

I love it. Normally I just read stories where they are adults but this was amazing. Can't wait to read some of your other stories.

hmmmmm... least favorite chapter so far. Just so I can stop being confused, does Ziva have her ninja skills in your fic? Because, if she did, this chapter had Ziva sooooo out of character it's not funny... she would have taken those guys down without blinking. BUT, if she doesn't have them yet, GREAT, GREAT chapter. Man, I feel like I'm being harsh... I usually don't write negativatory comments... sorry. I would appreciate it if you would clear that up for me, though!

Just a guess... she's gonna kick arse at go-carting! :-)

Okaayyyyy... I see Ziva not defending herself with the skills she has in these situations. But, I hope I get to see her do it soon. Oh, and just so you don't think I only say bad things, I LOVE YOUR STORY! :-D

So far, I'm extremely intrigued... and the title only futhers my curiosity... :-)