Aw! It was fluffy, touching, cute... and any other word there is in the deictonary that I can't think of right now.. lol. it was really cute!

.:Pandakins:.

Nothing hideous about it. Very touching. Loved it. :)

That was good!

Very cute.

Just Jill

its ok. i think it should have more detail. but dont stop writeing-

Ah, you write good Yuki/Shuichi. Great to see something from Yukis POV, Im in love with that man! Neat idea, I really liked it.

hmm, the end sounds familiar, the little signature thing... i havent checked yet, but did you write some guilty gear fanfics? Maybe Yami no Matsuei... either way, I remember reviewing them ;; i liked the story, very cute with an angsty overtone. lovely.

oh knock it off, it wasnt hideous. you actually had a very good choice of words here. it was nice reading your fic. keep it up! SMILE! SAY CHEESE!

nicely done. for a moment i thought yuki was waiting at the park..

This is absolutely cute. It's absolutely Yuki. A great Fic. _

Wow.. *really* interesting concept, I liked it a lot! Yuki was really in-character despite the bouts of vulnerability.. and Shuuichi was adorable.. XD Meh, too short though :p Loved the delicious bits of alotted shounen-ai... want more fluff! *_*

oh... i didn't know you were on ffnet... great fic! hope you write more gravi!

Heh! I'd say it was original, and cute in a twisted way. Yuki's a bit psycho but then again so's the original...

I got confused.

Uhm. They were in NY? Or in the park? *shakes head*

I really need to stop reading fanfiction in the morning.

*pats shoulder* Great job! I liked it, although I thought it was ganna go angsty on me!

- Kana -

very nicely written. very very nice.