Even though the ending of the original story is open to the reader's immagination, this is its most likely conclusion.. nice work!

This is good and it's believable. You should totally do a sequel, I'd read it.

Great story! I totally think that Oskar should have become a vampire. I loved their interaction

And haha about Eli sleeping in the closet :)

I really liked this one-shot!

It was short, but still gripping and well written. It seemed to fit in so well with the story of the book.

I'm glad you referred to Eli as a "He". Some people have been uncomfortable with that fact and I can't understand why. It's a story that (as far as I'm concerned) is about one of the truest friendships and you captured it really well!

You should write that sequel you mentioned. I would like to see how Oskar adapts to immortality.