I just recently found this story on your LJ, and since I don't have an active account there, I'm writing you here :)

I just loved the whole story, it was very nice. Your characterisation of Mamori was flawless, and I absolutely loved that theme in the last chapter, "waiting", so I'm definitely looking forward to reading the sequel :D

As a matter of fact, I think I'll do just that now

Oh I really love this fic! I really love HiruMamo and I've been searching for a story about them in college and here it is! They both were quite in character and that makes me love this fic more! :D

Good morning,
This fic is AWESOME! I already read "Kaleidoscope Heart" but Cristal Noir told me to look for this fanfiction as well. And I don't regret it at all Amazing piece of work, and even though such a scheme has already been done for this couple, you doing it sound more epic if ever possible! I love how you write down their feelings, the little things of life and Mamori's mum showing up between them... Their feelings are lovely and i want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a good story in these stressful time of mine. Congratulations! Do you mind if I translate this epicness into French for those desesperate French HiruMamo addicts? I want to share the love!
Have a wonderful day, Cherry Tiger!
*Hermi-kô***

ME GUSTO MUCHO LA HISTORIA PORQUE TU LA HICISTE DIFERENTE Y ME ENCANTO MUCHO. TE FELICITO

This was a really amazing story! 3 Thanks for the splendid read!

Great fic!

My favourite part was where Mamori and Hiruma understood each other without having to say a word. It's just so sweet _

I'm going to read the sequel now! :D

I must say, due to you and some unexpectedly adorable fanart, I have really grown attached to this pairing. I thought that finding decent Eyeshield 21 fanfics for these two would be difficult, especially since Hiruma would just be a pain to write in-character. But you made it WORK. I never felt as awkward as I thought I'd be while reading this, and the ending just melted my heart. As of now, consider be a satisfied reader now enjoying the sequel.

Feels like forever since I last picked up a HiruMamo fic. I finished this and felt warm and fuzzy and thought I should see who wrote it - VOILA! Surprise, surprise

I know kudos are overdue but I enjoyed this piece a lot. Thumbs up!

love your story

Waaahhhh... I remembered my mother.. mothers are really the best! :D This chapther is not just HiruMamo :D heeee :) Thanks for writing.. things changes, hah, how mothers react to that? :D and this is not the first time I read this story and I can say, the ending is really, really good. As the mother said of them being special people. :)

I reread this chapter but really, this is a high possibility especially because they've learned to understand each other more on the latter part of the manga and anime and to think that it was still during high school, how much more during college? Their talk was not a fight but an honest evaluation of some things and with the way they already understood each other and that they really are friends, I really can see it happening. :D

since this is already a complete story about the hirumamo couple i decided that i should leave my review at the end of it... and here it goes...

CREATE A SEQUEL TO THIS FANFIC.! kyaaa.! kyaaa.! kyaaa.!

i feel so unfulfilled.. you left the story hanging at the last chapter and i'm just dying to read what's next... Dx

but i really did enjoy your story.. i was just like so hurima to be caring in his own way... so cute.. so cute... *moe flowers gushing out of nowhere drowning the idiot who is writing this review*

so please write a sequel to it pretty please.. :D

wow! I always loved True Love Waits stories. :)

Was it OOC? hmmm... i don't think it was..I can see the characters perfectly. And the greatest fanfics are always the fanfics that makes people see the original characters not making them the same face or name with different personality. Good job! :)

I'll be waiting for the next story you said is puffing up in connection to this. :)

I really think your story is a great possibility...on how they'll pursue their own things for now and have a promise.. AHA! :DD I remembered Kyosuke Kanou and Miki Tsujiwaki of Hungry Heart :)

Wow, I love the ending! I especially love when Hiru told Mamo to wait for him and that someday he'd make Mamo his goal. And Mamo said she'd wait for him too! Oh, it's soooo romantic 3 Love it a lot, you're doing a great job and I'll be waiting for more HiruMamo from you _

awesome! so... is there going to have another fic?