 Natalie Maple 2001-12-29 . chapter 1Yes, this is quite a enjoyable read! ^_^
Its not that twisted, really, and I love the girl! Please write more! |
 Arti Cuno4 2001-11-01 . chapter 1Hi,Arti!Just wanna say that this fic's one of ya best! |
 Arti Cuno 2001-09-18 . chapter 2 Yes,Naoko,you have suceeded again with this fanfic.
I throughly enjoyed this fic. |
 Pikajenn 2001-03-16 . chapter 2OMG, you are too good a writer!! I was LMAO at the whole Uranus thing. I always wondered what Sailor Uranus thought of everytime before she announced herself. I was laughing so much at that part that I was glad no one was home. Totally Shigeru to say something like that with no care that he had to battle her! And the whole payback thing....You write a nice mix of the Japanese names/language/version in a way that those who aren't familiar with it, can understand. ::sighs:: Another author on my alert list..Great job, I look forward to the next part! |
 Pikajenn 2001-03-16 . chapter 1I see I'm not the only one writing Shigeru drinking something in a café in a random city!! Great fic! One question and I'm hoping someone knows: It's always bothered me that when Satoshi went for his Earth Badge that Shigeru said he already had "ten badges". I thought there were only 8 gyms in Kanto. Had Shigeru been in Johto already? Or am I just spinning something out of control? Anyhow, great fic. I'm on to Chapter 2! |
 Tiamat XIII 2001-02-04 . chapter 1I love all your fics, Arti! You have permission to use Arcanite(the Pokemon) in your stories if you want to! E-mail me if you want more info. And one last thing. **tapes Aquarius' mouth shut** This is her story! She can do it the way she wants to! |
 Khaydarin9 2000-12-18 . chapter 1Way cool story, Arti! And Aquarius, stop flamin' it's a great fic, no matter what you say *scary face*
-SparrowHawk signin' out :> |
 Aquarius 2000-10-23 . chapter 1 That is a pretty crappy come-back. That is just supporting yourself on air. I really wish you would stop acting pompous and change the frickin' story. I'm not coming back so you can write all the little come-backs you want but I won't see them, nor giva a flying rat's **!
(Sorry people, just get pravoked a lot with the that "Arti" produces) |
 Faeore 2000-09-28 . chapter 1About the "not water" I made him a dual type, I'm an aquarius too, I know what the heck I'm doing. Aquarius means "Water Carrier" so I made him water, the real element is AIR, hence the line "Aquarius jumped from the water it was on and floated down to the ground, almost as if it was swimming on air" And most attacks were an air-like water mixing. I know all the element, planet, color, personality, relations with all the signs since I studied astrology. I don't mean to sound like a but I was going to explain it more next part. |
 Aquarius 2000-09-28 . chapter 1 May I make a suggestion, this story is incorrect. I am an Aquarius, and believe it or not, our element is NOT water. Could you please find out what our real element is PLEASE? "I'm not gonna make your life easier by telling you what it is" |
 Kalah Exclamation Mark 2000-09-19 . chapter 1I loved it......Gotta read more....*runs off quickly* |
 Brock 2000-09-18 . chapter 1 The Fics Are Still Best ^_^ |
 Brock 2000-09-18 . chapter 1 Wow Great Fic Arti ^_^ You Always Write The Best! |
 WindStorm 2000-09-13 . chapter 1 Still great as ever, Arti ! Keep it up, I still want to read the whole thing in my lifetime ^_^ (I know you're busy w/ school/work and all, so I don't mean to rush things. Take your time and keep the story great.) |
 Starkiller 2000-09-13 . chapter 1 RAW! U write the best fics! Thanks 4 putting the second part up!! see ya! |