 Feva 9/3/00 . chapter 1 You have to write anouther chapter soon dont leave me
here that was a great story and your really talented 8) |
 Crys 8/31/00 . chapter 1 Great! I'm a new fan of the Arti fics! |
 Daredelvil 8/31/00 . chapter 1 I've read most of your other fics and this one looks like being just as cool as the others!
Dare: No FAIR! My fics aren't HALF as good as hers!
Kya:Ah well, you can't have everything, y'know.
Dare:(sighs) I can't have Anything. |
 TTT 8/29/00 . chapter 1 truely messed it |
 John 8/29/00 . chapter 1 One word... WOW! This part was terrific! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love the way you portray Shigeru (Gary) as a hero. Satoshi (or Satori) was getting a little boring anyway. It is about time the fans of Pokemon saw Shigeru in a new light. Arti is also a fascinating new character. Can't wait to read more! |
 Chiroka 8/28/00 . chapter 1 This story was great. Jus another work of art by articuno |
 akira 8/27/00 . chapter 1 cool! but you might wanna start from farther back in history _; i can't wait for part two! heh.. something makes me wanna write stories like you too.. _ cuz they're great! |
 Sugar Crazed 8/26/00 . chapter 1 I think the reviews for this are over-rated, it's not an 11.5, I'd say its about an 8 at most. Shigeru is an evil ... thing... but, if you like him, then by all means, keep writing! |
 Kojirou 8/26/00 . chapter 1 Wow, Arti, just read the whole thing today, it's wonderful. A great read that will want your reader to just continue reading and never stop!
Kojirou |
 WindStorm 8/25/00 . chapter 1 It's pretty good, and much different from your other fanfics, I hope to read more chapters of it. |
 Litanime 8/25/00 . chapter 1 Great start, seemed like the style was different from your other fics. I'm not complaining though! |
 Cferra 8/25/00 . chapter 1 Great job Arti! write some more! It's interesting! I can't wait to see more of it! ON a scale of 1 to 10, Its an 11 and a half! Good work! |