You have to write anouther chapter soon dont leave me

here that was a great story and your really talented 8)

Great! I'm a new fan of the Arti fics!

I've read most of your other fics and this one looks like being just as cool as the others!

Dare: No FAIR! My fics aren't HALF as good as hers!

Kya:Ah well, you can't have everything, y'know.

Dare:(sighs) I can't have Anything.

truely messed it

One word... WOW! This part was terrific! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love the way you portray Shigeru (Gary) as a hero. Satoshi (or Satori) was getting a little boring anyway. It is about time the fans of Pokemon saw Shigeru in a new light. Arti is also a fascinating new character. Can't wait to read more!

This story was great. Jus another work of art by articuno

cool! but you might wanna start from farther back in history _; i can't wait for part two! heh.. something makes me wanna write stories like you too.. _ cuz they're great!

I think the reviews for this are over-rated, it's not an 11.5, I'd say its about an 8 at most. Shigeru is an evil ... thing... but, if you like him, then by all means, keep writing!

Wow, Arti, just read the whole thing today, it's wonderful. A great read that will want your reader to just continue reading and never stop!

Kojirou

It's pretty good, and much different from your other fanfics, I hope to read more chapters of it.

Great start, seemed like the style was different from your other fics. I'm not complaining though!

Great job Arti! write some more! It's interesting! I can't wait to see more of it! ON a scale of 1 to 10, Its an 11 and a half! Good work!