Awwwwwwwww so sad for our little Peeta Mellark! It must stink being him! I wonder if Peeta will ever tell Katniss about his nightmares! I hope he does!

*cries* So sad! Well, not completely, but you know. Sad that they have to be haunted like that for the rest of their lives. I loved the bit of interaction with the daughter (squee) and the mentions of the nameless textbook history of the Games. Overall, very vivid. I could see this actually happening.

-Skye

*Gasp* I panicked when Katniss "Died" there -_- Awesome though :D especially Peeta's dream and the scene with his kid :)

Well I love rain, and if you need it I can give you some,pluse it's raining buckets in Utah. That was one of my favorite Peeta Pov.s, I would love it if you would contenue, and do what Suzanne Collins didn't do. Give the childeren names. I recomed ether Rue or Portia for the girl and Cinna or the Bakers name, if he had a name, for the boy. Peeta loved his Dad and Katniss loved Cinna and they both died, so that works right. But just think about it, okay? Also I LOVE your username, eclipse can stand for anythig important, and it also fits your writeing. And the heart is very important one of your vital organs, you know, and every one needs heart.

30th story? Congrats! You should definitely do more Hunger Games (especially Peeta-related :) ), this was excellent. Poor Peeta, man...it really did bug me in the books that Katniss never really did much for his nightmares, never really considered what they were about. And I can imagine the tracker jacker venom would make it even harder for him to distinguish dream from reality.

That was so well-written, the dream-summaries were perfectly balanced and the emotion believable. Great job.

13 unlucky! Haha, anyway, that was good! I liked the end. You had good suspense as well!