Great story! I love the loving Malfoys :-) Thank you for sharing :-)

the speech they use is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too polite... but otherwise i like the story.

Yay! I really enjoyed this story, and though I'm sad it's over, it was a good ending. I'm kind of glad you skipped the battle, because that's really hard to do and not necessary to the plot. Well done!

Ahahahaha...LOL at Hermione and Ron. Once again, short and sweet...I do hope so that Draco is the dominant one...he is viewed more often as it because Harry tends to be written a little feminine at times which suits him because of the whole "My parents are dead-no one loves me-i got a snake after me-sirius is dead-my best friends have each other-i got no one" thing going on. Get what I mean? Well...you write fast!

Still pondering on who is the dominant and the submissive here...Draco is so cute! So is harry!

It's BETTER! You've improved! It's cute too! Is Harry the submissive or the dominant? I kind of forgot...or may have misread a few parts...

Well, it IS a good plot and all. I commend you for that but just to give a little critique...not to offend, just a suggestion: please don't make it too...fast and blunt. it gives away the romantic feel of the story and it really is a nice plot...you're one of those authors who have great grammar and imagination. just please dont make it too brash and so hurried. Try taking tips from: Mansion built on Sand by Jinko...its here on ffn...please update!