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Olv1993 10/10/10 . chapter 1
I could feel Enrique's bitterness. I enjoyed this, the fact that Enrique being attacked by his Bit Beast isn't usually mentioned, nor have anything about what he did to his Bit Beast after the battles with Tyson. I wonder if Enrique will EVER find a way to kill a Bit Beast. Thinking about it, Kai's Dranzer seemed to 'die' after the Beybattle against Brooklyn, but was seen in the finale against Tyson. I guess whatever you do, there really is no way...I wonder if actually killing it while out of the Bit Chip would work?
PandaPjays 10/9/10 . chapter 1
Well that was fun!

I love the way you've thought about the consequences of Amphilion's attack and taken it to a logical conclusion. I especially loved Enrique's bitterness at the bad news report and the way in which you led us down through the layers of protection to see Amphilion's possibly-not-so-final resting place.

The concept of this story is just fascinating to think about. Enri's loss of control over his bitbeast (especially considering the level of control his previously held) and Amphilion's subsequent aggressiveness, takes all the power away from Enri for possibly the first time in his life. That's a powerful thing and definitely explains his (possibly a bit paranoid) reaction of locking Amphilion up under as many layers of security as he can justify. This also explains his deep fear of his bitbeast- Enri's never really been in the situation where he doesn't have all the power and that would frighten the crap out of him.

All in all, a fascinating read, I love it!

XD I would also just like to say that the image of Johnny with a welding torch will stay in my mind forever- making me smile each and every time I think of it.
AquilaTempestas 10/9/10 . chapter 1
Ha! This is indeed an interesting one shot.

Enrique killing a bit beast. Wonder how he's going to achieve that? Poor Enrique.

Hey I was wondering do you take requests?

Aquila
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