That would have been such a good ending to that episode. It's so fitting.

I agree, Alec should have been in that episode.

"What else do I have better to do? I'll be running anyway why not run with you?" -Alec (I LOVE THAT!)

I really like this addition to the episode. I love the dynamic between them.

Well done!

I agree completely agree! The first thing Logan should have done is called Alec. He could have had her out of there, and patched up in 15 minutes flat. But no, Logan had to prove that he wasn't worthless. Stupid idiot.

Great story. I loved the whole thing!

clumsybookgirl13

I agree! I was miffed when Alec wasn't there in Harbor Lights...He should have been the one saving Max not Logan!

I loved this piece! Potrayed Alec's anger very well!

great story

I totally agree- he should have been. And I loved how you put together Logan's reasoning- I completely agree. Logan is such an a**. But I really enjoyed how connected Max & Alec are and how they understand each other so well. You did a great job. :)

I love this story! I was really mad that Alec wasn't in that epy!

Great story!

I AGREE! there was like a three episode period with No Alec... i watched them all in order and was thinking about fast forwarding...

You played this scene good, well done!

Han

Wow, that was great! Really emotional! Like I always say; keep it up and have fun! Cya around, mate! _'

Ps: And, yeah, I totally agree with ya that Alec should have been in HL...I was so pissed. But, why don't cha make a fic where he's actually in that episode? You're an awesome writer, so I'm sure you could pull it off...D

Take care,

Izzy

thank you for another great story. i can't get enough of your writing. it's really great. _

I loved that fic. So sweet :)

Happy to see that someone saw a glaringly obvious problem in this ep. Logan if he had had Max's best interest at heart would have done the logical thing. Get the guy trained for this to help- i love how you have finished the ep with her acknowledging Alec's worth and wanted presence

oh i love that...that was great...r u thinking of adding another chapter because that would be even better...but this is still good...i love how they dont fight...and she isnt biting his head off...they're just talking and reminiscing sorta...which is really nice and refreshing...i meant i love the banters and angst but this is really good...anyway, good stuff...hope to read more

this is good! and completely plausible... i know what u mean w/ alec not in the episode... thru out the whole thing, i kept thinkin': it woulda saved max (& logan) a LOT of trouble if logan would've just called alec... i mean, he would've gotten her out! but i guess neither of them trust him enuff.. what a shame...

awesome fic. they should have put something like this at the end of HL.