I love this perfect ending. Though I will always be up for more :)

I really like the way you write, and the plot's very good. I want to see what happens next! :)

Nice idea. I 3 them but it just doesn't seem that believable. Well written though, I think the snappy change of perspective works. about the man at the door too!

Always great to see this pairing :)

It ws a bit difficult to read with all the different POV's. Is there any way youcould make it easier? Like maybe putting (Frans POV) above Frans part, or putting a line between each change or scene change? Something like that would be really helpful :)

I love Frernard, they are ace. Very awesome fic.