this is an excellant poem, I loved One Day at a Time and would NOT stop crying through it. I was JuliaHrtly776 back then do Pheonix knows me by that name but I remember printing out the entire thing and reading it over and over again. Personally I think it's one of the best fics ever written. ) Great poem, too.

*sob* ! *hugs her Squall-life size stuff...person*

I loved 'One Day at a Time', too! That's like the best fic on the whole friggin' site! It was just the BEST fic! So, anybody who reads this HAS TO GO READ ONE DAY AT A TIME! Luv ya Pheonix, and you Crimson. Peace!

*stunned*

Gorgeous... absolutely outstanding. I can't say enough about it and the wonderful fanfic it's based on... but I hardly know *what* to say. I feel so drawn to Zell... and this wonderful story (both endings and this poem) drew out exactly what it was that I saw in Zell in the game. And as someone who has been depressed for a very long time (but in recovery for a year now and still workin') AND as someone who has been around other people who were depressed or cutting themselves or suicidal... it comes across as realistic to me. I think you've captured it realistically. Excellent work on a hard topic to write about. I know you've touched some people with it!

i read your summary and then i started reading sergeant phoenix' story. so powerful, so sad. this poem rules!

I don't know much about poetry but that was great!

But please stop talking about how we all need friends. It kinda makes me depressed (I won't explain that, it's a long and... well, depressing story)

[brawls]That is so true,dammit![brawls again]

very, very good job on your part, as far as the poem goes, and of course i have to agree with everyone else that "one day at a time" was an incredible fic. keep up the good work, both you and Sergeant Phoenix. BTW, how is the "other version" of "one day at a time" going?

Both you and Sergeant Phoenix managed to convey a very powerful message. Commendable effort, and a touching poem.

I know how you feel to not have any Reviews,so I think your poem rocked! It was awesome! But Please R & R my stories Please? Thanks a lot Crimson! Your poems are outstanding! Better than mine...