Another good beginning.

Looks intresting keep it up..

Hm. Certainly an interesting continuation from the previous chapter.

I look forward to where this is going.

Well, well, this certainly is interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. It should prove enlightening.

Dude it's been many months since your last entry, welcome back!

I love your other stories and it's this looks to be just as epic as your last ones, awesome ending btw.

An odd start. perhaps you can mention which series you are crossing. For those that aren't familiar with it.

Kingdark