I'm glad to see a PeachxGanondorf story, though it is not true love. They hardly have a liking too each other. I suppose id like to find a fic with them actually sprouting true love.

Interesting plot, though a hole is this "government." Um, last time I checked Hyrule was an monarchy and Link is said monarch.

Also, grammar. There are numerous run on sentences and periods where there should be question marks.

Be c areful how you portray your characters, though you're doing just fine. Keep it up.