Not bad. You need to give more details about Mr. Frantz. It would also be nice to know how they got to the port where they sailed back to Germany. None the less a pretty good story. Thank you for writing it. L.

awwwwwww i love your story :)

Aw so sweet

keep writing please keep writing

I liked it was just the ending happened too fast like it needed some more exitement .

it was a wonderful ending. Opposed to the sad, depressing ending in the book. I would have much rather this version have been in the book.:D

That was a great ending! Happy! I could imagine it. good work.

I still have the RP, it's on the 1st link in my profile now. It's on the 3rd too. IDK I most likely want to RP in the 1st.

Kind of abrupt, but I liked it, especially 'cause they both live :)