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Reviews for: Parallel
Dance Elle Dance 4/17/11 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this. I think you did a great job with this. It was just very well written and bittersweet. Amazing work!
Like A Dove 12/14/10 . chapter 1
There are tears in my eyes right now, no lie.

This is a very well-written and lovely one-shot. Great work!
Azrael Jinsei 12/14/10 . chapter 1
That was so good, it made me cry. Thank you for writing it.
XpheonixrisingX 11/24/10 . chapter 1
Agh! This story makes me want to cry every time I read it! Bittersweet endings always get to me. This is so good; I really enjoy finding and re-reading it. Thanks for posting it :)
thecivilunrest 11/8/10 . chapter 1
Oh God. Normally I don't really read Zutara fics (I'm not a big fan of the pairing myself, but I'll read/write almost anything and I just picked this story because I loved the summary.) but this one was absolutely fantastic.

I just... loved it. I loved how you kept the summary woven tightly througout the entire fic without being obvious about it. You have to think about how that line fits, but when things finally click you realize just WHY it's so wonderful.

I also adored the part about Zuko telling Katara about his imaginary wife and his imaginary house, that was so cute, but at the same time kind of bittersweet because they both have it just beyond their reach.

Gah. This was lovely.
technicolor-dreaming 11/6/10 . chapter 1
Gahh. This was incredible. I was just amazed at how in-character everything was.

Great job!

*favorites*

-Demigod
Foxfire Inari 11/3/10 . chapter 1
This is so sad and so very beautiful. I love it.
Wyngana 10/21/10 . chapter 1
NGAW the story is like, so friggen good, but the ending that I was hoping for didn't happen, its like DD: NOOOOOOO

But your writing is extremely good. And I think that the swtiching of the scenes or flashbacks were a nice touch to this fic.

*sniffles*

It's so SAD :L
Scherherazade 10/13/10 . chapter 1
Heart wrenching and well written.
Sere'sLight 10/12/10 . chapter 1
very meloncholy, butin a heart wrenching good kind of way.

its sad but you can understand why things are the way they are.
ScarletWaterBender 10/12/10 . chapter 1
Now I wanna cry! That was so... so BEAUTIFUL! *sobbing* WHY, SUKI? WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CATCH THAT STUPID COLD?
anonymous 10/12/10 . chapter 1
bitter sweet, lovely written
AnnaAza 10/11/10 . chapter 1
That's so sad! (sniffs) I wouldn't have become leader and marry another man. I'm so selfish, but I wouldn't do that.
sokkantylee 10/11/10 . chapter 1
That was so beautiful yet sad, you actually succeeded in making both mtself and my sister cry.

Definitely one of the best oneshots I've read in a very long time...

Thanks for sharing.
Letters 10/11/10 . chapter 1
This was so sad! I wanted to cry a bit at the end. Good job! :)
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