Its so good :) I love your story. It was really good. I almost cried when Devin died. I cant wait to read more 3

Hmhmm. Zelos was fine. More or less how he would normally act... shameless flirt.

See also: trololololol-lololol-lololol.

ZELOS-SAMAAAAAAAA! *hearts*

Yes! I was expecting you to introduce him in this chapter the usual way, but you made him appear a bit earlier as a hero to save Aurelia from those thugs! What a way to make a grand entrance, then again, I'm sure that Zelos wouldn't have it any other way. XD

Hahaha, Aurelia might be annoyed now, but I hope that she finds out that Zelos' flirtings will actually be useful, since all the women he talks to would give him useful gifts in return. XD When they're on the run, I'm sure this will be especially useful... and a good way to save money. And though they won't know it yet, Zelos can actually be the person to be able to lift the party's spirits up when Colette's not around (though his attempts may probably come off as annoying to them XD).

And as much as I would like to see Aurelia and Zelos interact, I hope you can build his relationship with ther others too, even if it may be offscreen. Since his relationship with Lloyd and the others determine whether he would betray the party or not. I figured he wouldn't betray them if he had more than one person to care about from the party. Well, that's my thought anyway. ; Personally, I always enjoyed the Zelos/Lloyd (platonic or otherwise) relationship, because those two just blend so well together with their differences, it can be both funny or insightful or touching depending on what they're talking about.

But ergh... Olivia's in Tethe'alla too? I don't think she would be able to hire those thugs if she wasn't. That was quick. o_o; This doesn't bode well for the others. And poor Aurelia at the end there... ;_; Now she'll probably be reminded of Devin every time she hears Zelos talks now, unless she forces herself to forget it.

Great chapter, Maggie! I really enjoyed this one! :D Oh, and you did Zelos fine this chapter, so don't worry about it.

Ciao, ciao!

Whew. Glad the others didn't kick Aurelia out of the party or anything like that. Then again, I expected them to understand her dilemma. I think you got everyone's reactions right, so that's a great thing. :D

From all of Botta's reactions here and the previous chapter... he seemed to... care for Aurelia for some reason. At least that's my assumption. I wonder if they are somehow related one way or another... his reactions seem too strange for just someone who appeared to have just met her back in Triet Desert. o_o;

Zelos is next chapter, HOORAY!

You did. He was as badass as ever. ALL HAIL ZELOS!

well done with this chapter and I was happy when Zelos showed up hehe

I felt bad for Aurelia at the end but I hope to see Zelos help her get through her pain as the story goes on :)

I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

I had to reread this entire fanfiction once you updated, I love it that much! 3

And Aurelia's related to Botta somehow, I know it!

Wow, update. Nice chapter.

My eyes widened when I saw that this story was updated already and I immediately went to reading the chapter hehe

I'm glad Aurelia is still with them... especially since they're in Tethe'alla already where a CERTAIN person is x) Definitely can't wait to see how their meeting goes ;)

As always, keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to the chapters to come!

That was exactly what I thought Lloyd would do. Excellent job with Aurelia's reveal. Keep up the good work.

ZEEELLLOOOSSSS WWWIIILLLDDDEEERRR

IT IS TIME! YES! YAY! BBQ! OMGJEBUS!

Nice.

Oh, dear. This is going to be awkward. Eh, good chapter, anyway.

Ohhhh crap. Drama Llama! XDD

I'm speechless at how this all turned out. I bet Yggdrasill erased all of Aurelia's memories of Kratos so she doesn't blow his cover, accident or not.

And now, after a long time of being away from him, Aurelia is back with Yggy once more. Will she chew him out for all the secrets he hid from her, or would she try to talk to him nicely since she still clearly has some feelings for him. Ah, but the others would be more suspicious if she did that.

Also, I wonder... did Aurelia come from a powerful knight family or something? That's what I thought when Kratos has remarked on her lineage. So... I'm assuming Yggy has kidnapped her from a young age or something because he realized her potential... or something.

But omg! You're halfway into the game now! We're about to reach Tethe'alla; I love that place! Because Zelos is there! XD I love Zelos, I really do. I love him as much as I do Lloyd: they're my top two favorite characters from the game.

Plus, I know that Aurelia and him are gonna get together eventually, so it's interesting to see how that all plays out. :D Though I doubt she'll like his womanizing tendencies, and would not be so easily swooned especially after Devin.

Looking forward to your next chapter! Ciao ciao!

Ouch.. poor Aurelia .; She had it pretty rough, hadn't she?

aAaaaAAaaWW your fic captured me like a chocolate cookie... we eat it all and get disapointed when we see we ate it all already... oooh I wanna see what happens next! D: AAaand for some reason I feel like maiming Kratos with a basketful of tomatoes... nhum.. tomatoes... cherry toms are deliciously good in salads..

hungry now..

anyway!

I'm liking your fic very much! hehhh and I can barely wait till Zelos enters the frey.. :D (I got hooked because the summary said ZelosOC... I'm sick of Zelloyd and Shelos... wanna something newwww! o/)

bye!

ommmggg hurrry xD